Sunday, September 18, 2011

Brain Matter (for #SampleSunday)

Here is the very first part of the first section of Brain Matter, a psychological crime thriller I am brewing up right now.  Hopefully, it will serve as awesome filler until my next blog post (this upcoming week)!

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Brain Matter



            The smell of burnt garbage clung heavily in the air, the end of it tainted with the sour stench of decay.  Mark cringed.  He was down the alley from the crime scene and he could already smell it.  This was going to be rough.
            With a nod, the blue shirt officer lifted up the yellow tape, waving for them to go under.
            The crumbling asphalt was wet, but not muddy like he expected.  It looked like it had been cleaned.  Mark stepped carefully, passing an open dumpster and a mound of black trash bags.  The crime scene techs were going to have to process all of it.
            A photographer made slow circles around an old metal drum, camera flash almost blinding in the dim light of the alley.  The barrel was obviously used for fires—and often.  Its red paint was either peeled away or mostly blackened, a few rust holes showing in the bottom.  The reek of decay rolled off the drum in waves.  Mark plucked a cloth out of his coat pocket, holding it over his nose and mouth.  It only gave him a small measure of relief.
            Slowly, Mark peered into the canister.

Wednesday, September 7, 2011

The First Draft

In some ways, the first draft is the hardest one.  It is a place where characters you have just met take over the page and force you to travel with them to unfamiliar locations boasting societies completely foreign to you.  Somehow, you are expected to forge forward, despite the inevitable culture shock and vertigo.

Does this sound familiar to you?  Well, I have some good and bad news.

The bad news is: the first draft never gets any easier.  It is always going to be a dazzling whirl-wind, a frightening and exhilarating roller coaster ride where you see the next turn too late to brace for it.  For me, that's really half the fun.

The good news is: there are ways to manage your first draft, and different ways to go about it.

Every writer has specific techniques, a tool-box, which at the base parts is shared between all writers, and yet when compiled, is uniquely their own.  That is part of what makes writing-- and reading-- so great.  Every writer is different in their own way.  Because of that, no one way of tackling the first draft will work for everyone.  I do, however, recommend trying out different methods, because you never know what will fit like a personally tailored glove until you try them on.

The usual debate I always see is between pantsers and plotters, or as I usually dub them, the discovery writer and the outline writer.  There is nothing wrong with either school, except for when people refuse to mix and match.  I am sure there is someone out there who can never plot a word, or they will suddenly lose momentum, and as the other side of the coin, someone who must plot out the scope of every scene, every character, and every sub-plot before setting a single word to paper (or keyboard).

However, those are just two people.  I think everyone else falls somewhere in the middle, and it is up to you to put on your mad writer lab coat (or whatever else you like writing in) and get to the experimentation.  First, however, we need some definitions.

The Plotter: a writer who brainstorms, often times extensively, before beginning to write on a new project.  This brainstorming can be done in many different ways.  Some plotters will write out character sheets, as though they are characters in a D&D campaign or in a favorite game.  Others will draw countless maps of the locations their characters will travel to.  Yet others write outlines with the main plot points and themes touched upon in every chapter.  It is a safety net, in a way, knowing where the story is going, and being able to write up to that final goal.  This method allows you to see the finish line, you just have to make the long run uphill to reach it.

The Adventurer: a writer who sits down with a blank page, either digital or physical, and begins writing without any earthly clue where they, or the story, is going.  The discovery writer often starts with a single idea which sparked their inspiration, or a single character, or a very base idea they want to explore, and start running with it.  Often times, they won't know the ending of their book until they have written it.  This is the seat of the pants, balls-to-the-wall way to go about writing, but at the same time, the writing grows organically from itself.

Most people fall somewhere between these two definitions.  I used to be a full out adventurer.  I would take a character and a ground situation and start writing.  And maybe, three drafts down the line, I might know what my story is, or at least have uncovered part of it.

Both schools have their cons to go with each pro.  The plotter, for instance, may run into scenes which seem forced, or feel like they have not truly been earned, because they follow their outline like it is the ten commandments and refuse to add or subtract from it.  The adventurer, on the other hand, might go off on tons of little side adventures, wandering around on miscellaneous tangents because they aren't really sure where they are going.

Once you know how you want to go about tackling your first draft, you then have to actually don your gear and run out on the battle field, into the heat of things.  It's daunting.  Starting a novel is a monumental task.  Novels can take years to come to full fruition, and after that, it could be years more before an editor actually looks at it, much less makes an offer.

Thankfully, we're just talking about a first draft here-- a rough draft, most specifically-- so we don't have quite so many issues to hunt down and fry.

There are many ways people use to motivate themselves to get the writing done, once they've made the pledge and begun.  One such option is National Novel Writing Month (better known as NaNoWriMo), where literally thousands of authors from all over the world set aside the month of November, holidays and all, to tackle that daunting first draft, with the goal of writing 50,000 words in a mere 30 days (that's almost 1700 words a day!).  It is extremely difficult, but I have successfully taken it down three years in a row, and will be returning to the fray in the upcoming year.

Another option is the Fantasy-Faction 500 Club (lovingly hash-tagged on Twitter as #ff500) which is made up of mostly fantasy writers (some sci-fi as well, and maybe a historical fiction or two).  Just like NaNoWriMo, the FF500 survives off the peer pressure, as all members are expected to write 500 words a day, which is a good number to start with if 1700 seems like too much.  The group is friendly, has daily check ins, and really helps with productivity.

These are two online writing "groups", but you could always set up a writing group with friends if collective pressure is your cup of tea.  Being as competitive as I am, knowing that other people have written more than me really gets me going, and some of my best wordcounts come from sitting across the table from a fellow writer, declaring a word-sprint, and going.

Despite the fact that the rough draft can be excruciatingly painful at times, and like a full out root-canal at others, there is nothing quite as satisfying (bar getting something positive from an editor) as finishing a rough draft.  Once those final words are penned, everything gets easier.  You have the hard part, discovering your story, out of the way.

I suggest printing out that bad-boy when you're done with it, and dancing with it.  Or throwing it like confetti.  Or something else that shows just how excited you are about completing that first, massive leap towards becoming a writer.

Good luck, and happy writing,
~Tiffany "Kysis" Tackett

Monday, September 5, 2011

An Update of the Writerly Sort

As many of you have noticed (or maybe not), I have not updated in a while.  This is not a place for me to make excuses about how busy I've been or talk about work or anything like that.  No, I'm here to make a promise and let you guys in on what I've been working on lately.

So, first, to the promise.

I promise to complete at least two blog posts per month for the rest of the year, at which time I will amp it up to one a week, if I haven't already gotten there.  Yes, that's right, two a month!  I'm taking baby steps, yes, but feel free to poke me if you see me slipping up any.

These posts will happen in the first full week and the third full week of each month.  I'm not setting an exact schedule yet, but I probably will during the next month, just to make sure I keep on task.

Some of the topics you can be looking forward to are.... (drum-roll please!)

  • My crash course to creative writing!  I want to use one of my blog posts a month towards this, and will be covering a very broad range of topics in these posts.  So far, I have only done posts about how to keep morale and productivity up.  Now, I really want to start delving into craft (and actually use my English degree towards something).
  • A chat about how useful beta-readers can be!  I have sadly lost my beta-reader (he didn't die, he just moved away... and other stuff), but I still believe in how amazing they can be when you have them!
  • Book reviews!  And not just book reviews, reviews on books about writing.  When I do these, they will be in addition to the two posts I have already promised you.  I am thinking that these will happen in the second full week of the month.  I'm still drawing up a schedule, so this is subject to change.
  • And some other stuff too.  Yeah, that was vague.  Feel free to request a topic!  If I don't know about it, I can certainly research (and boy do I love research!  Not sarcastic, really).
So, now that I have the business half of this out of the way, here's the other part of my update.  Yes, I've been working here and there (movie sets are awesome, by the way), but I have also been writing.  And since this blog is all about helping your writing, I figured some of you might be interested in seeing what I'm working on (especially since I use all the tips listed here to help my own writing)!

  • Hope of the Mirra is an epic fantasy with a strong philosophical undercurrent, told from the point of view of two different characters, the first a young knight, the second the last Mirra.  My logline for the book is: "Faith and hatred have one thing in common: they can both be blind."  Right now HotM is 65,000 words long, and I am shooting for somewhere between 100,000-120,000 words in the end.  It may end up being longer, however, I highly doubt it will end up shorter, with how it's going at this point.  This book started in 2004 as "Knights of Mikara", became "Mikara Falling" in 2005, and then was completely overhauled at the beginning of this year when it became Hope of the Mirra.  I have submitted it to Tor once and DAW twice, in previous drafts, and it was rejected all three times.  I'm still working on it though!
  • Brain Matter is a psychological thriller with three POV characters, one a detective who is investigating a string of serial killings, one is a prestigious neurosurgeon during the day and a serial killer at night, and the third is a defense attorney who gets dragged into the twisted web of attorney-client confidentiality and blackmail.  Right now, it is in the very early planning stages.  I've written the first two scenes of it, and realized that I have a TON of work to do before I can really set off on this one. This project is brand new, as I first started mulling over it on August 20th of this year.
  • First Flight is another epic fantasy, only it has a larger focus on the adventure and war than it does on philosophical issues.  It is my longest standing project by far, as I started it in 2001 (under the horrible name "A Knight of Fire and the Lord of the Sky"), and worked on it for years, before I went back and tried to completely overhaul it under a new name in 2003 (the equally as horrible "War of the Dragons"), and then HotM took over my brain in 2004 and I didn't touch this book until 2010 when I decided to scrap all the old and write it anew for NaNoWriMo (under a slightly better, but still not right name "Flight of the Phoenix").  At that time I realized I was focusing on the wrong aspects of the story and it is currently waiting to be revived from the ashes again, now under a new name.
  • Mikara Falling has become the name for what used to be chapter 10 and chapter 11 in the old "Mikara Falling", now pulled out and made into a book of its own.  It's another epic fantasy with a heavy sci-fi twist, and it's divided into three "books", the first from the point of view of a genetic scientist, the second from his creation, and the third alternating back and forth between them.  It's a dark, DARK book, and it will be written (the first draft, at least) for this year's NaNoWriMo.
Those are my current projects, though in all truth, Hope of the Mirra is the only one getting any love right now.  I'll be posting more on Twitter now that I have time again, and updating when I'm writing.  I will also be participating in #wordmongering and #writingsprints again. Yay!

So, what sort of topics would you like to see from me in the future?

Happy writing!
~Tiffany "Kysis" Tackett